I liked the reading, it didn’t seem like you guys were bored. It was also good to see people’s opinions about the economy change from “oh, its not that bad” to “oh yeah, its bad,” although some interviews could be shorter. The answers are strong, you asked the right questions, and your interviewees gave good answers.
The piece could use room tone in some places, like in the beginning when someone asks about how the future is uncertain (the sound cuts off abruptly). There could be better fading between interviews.
“Next time consider delving deeeep into the unconscious world of technical edits” <<< K. Swan
I think that it’s easier if you ask less people, that way you don’t have so much audio to go through. That also makes it easier to cut audio and move it around, and it gives you more time to work on fades.
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